Tuzse Yu Gum - Composed Gazhal

very nice Ghazal shashank….

but i think guitar sound should at lower volume….

yaade wo teri….sahi nahi laga….

Very well done Shashank. I am not well versed in Hindi and cant follow the lyrics all that well. However it felt as if the song came from the bottom of your heart. It had a beautiful feel to it.

Hey nice one shashank…Tune is good..I have issues with ur pronounciation…Its not perfect..words like ‘ghum’, ‘jazbaat’ are not crrect…

Regards!!!

Sunny – Let’s make some music!!!

Awesome shashank !!! ..... Too good yaar. Whose responsible for this pain ??? :)

Shashank….very good tune…and impressive from a composer’s point of view. A good singer and good arrangements would definitely lift this tune to great heights :)

Very nice composition shashank. Soothing to the heart.

Amazing feel!!..you shud add a few more instrument tracks and it wud be a great package

@Sourabh,

Thanks man ! Yeah Guitar and Sound Recorded at one Go…I tried to overcome this in Processing…but not that Successful I think… :D

@George,

Yes…its really close to my heart…I forgot it for about 5-6 years…and today it just licked to me when I was trying some Jamming on My Guitar…I don’t have Keys here…So really can’t do much of it…

@Sunny, Agreed Man…I didn’t take care of that…i was in a hurry and a bit Excited

@Sumit, Fortunately…I didd’t have to sing this for anybody… :D This is just a state of mind when compsoing…Not realistic expression… :D

@Pradip, thanks for ur comments…it really matter me a lot… Do u think it would suit in ur voice ?

@Abhishek, Thanks you Sir, Thats what I expect from each of My composition… :D

@Nithya,

Sorry…I don’t have zany setup here in BELGIUM …So Can’t really do about it now…but Your Felling conveyed to my Future Planning Department :D…Wud try to get some help for arranging this track…

hi shank,

i really know very little about music, i generally go by tune and lyrics of the song.i think lyrics are very nice and tune is also nice and very soothing bt i think ur pronounciation of urdu words are not good you could have done it better.one more thing i want to say tht gazals go very well with harmonium rather thn wth guitar you could have used guitar in addition to harmonium….well its just a suggestion

Shashank, Well composed composition. I would have loved to see you sing with a little more normalizing effect with music….somewhere vocals seem loud and somewhere, they get repressed…...But all the same a great effort.

I am definitely hooked on to this :)

hey shashank,

“Not sure how much response I would get on this Old Genre Song specially if its a Gazhal…”

MAN , WHO TOLD YOU THAT GHAZAL IS AN OLD GENRE OF MUSIC ???

Hi Shashank, Nithya suggested this song to me. Could you please send me the minus track, I would like to attempt this one. Please send the track to bhemanta@gmail.com
Thanks

very good very good !!!

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I liked the previous one better (with george singing). Your guitar seems a little out of tune in this one. Also, it’s not a Ghazal, but a Geet :)
Are you using cakewalk by any chance?
P.S. Also, work on your pronunciation. Gaane me 4 chaand lag jaayenge :)

Yeah Shashank your a perfect composer…theres a room for improvement as far as singing and diction is concerned….keep it up…