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bin tere kya hai jeena – 2
mere dil ki raani tum
meri khushiyon ka mausam
mere khwaabon ki taaviz
mere sapanon ki tasveer
bin tere kaisi yaar
woh jeet ho ya haar
tere sang hai sab kuchh
tu na ho toh bekaar
bin tere kya hai jeena – 2
suni khaali raaten
ruthi feeki baaten
har aahat pe chaaukun
tujhko harsu dekhu
tujhko hardam sochu
tujhko har pal chahu
tere bin toh jeevan mera hai intezaar
bin tere kya hai jeena – 2
tere saath jiye jo pal
kuchh unse nahi badhkar
tere khaatir saans main loon
teri khaatir jeeta hoon
marne ki tamanna bhi
tere saath main rakhta hoon
tu hai jeene ki wajah
kar mera aitbaar
bin tere kya hai jeena…
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Nice try sourabh…Try to have more control over LANDING NOTES (end part sustain of any word\line),,,..Its flat over there…BIN is wrong everywhere..No issues..I know u r capable of correcting ur mistakes :)
Cheers!!!
Sunny – Lets make some music!!!
Sourabh … This was a rocking performance man… I have played this song for 4 times continuously .. Enjoyed .. and loved it totally… Kya dum hai aapki aawaz mein… maza aa gaya 5/5
Here go the comments in the way u like… :D
I would be little strict this time…Ok ?
0.18: Humming slipped a little out of scale<br/>0.42: ‘JEENA’ dippedAfter that I felt a lot of dipping didn’t had patience to do complete song post mortum…
Last few lines was complete out of scale…
I still sugget to be accurate singer and to do friendship with notes….Please try to play tune with some instrument…this way you can compare ur each and every note with the CORRECT one(Instrument’s)....
You need to practise with really somebody Better than you…Not sure who? how? When?
I know you can sound better than this!!...I guess Shashank has given the the technical detials :)
sunny:- thnx for ur comment ,ya ur right i need to have more control over LANDING NOTES,i will definatly work on it.<br/><br/>sumit:- thnx for ur lovely comment,u always motivate me for doing better next time :)Shashank:-ya thts the shashanks style of commenting :)<br/>ya shashank i m thinking of joining a Guitar Class so tht i can understand the SUR better.<br/><br/>Nithya:- thnx Nithya for inspiring me for doing better :)ya i will take care of what shashank said….
dude have a good voice !! man ..wonder why i never heard this earlier
Good voice but a lot of flat notes, generally during landings.. I guess Sunny has already told you bout it.. Then we have the ending which was messed up.. The dynamics are still not right.. What you could do is, listen to the original song and try to imitate, not the style but the way they render.. I hope it makes a difference.. All the best.. Cheers.. \m/
DJ
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really sourabh this is one of ur songs i have heard repeatedly i have heard other songs of urs but this one rocks dude u r in complete control and sing this effortlessly 5.0/5.0 from me