Sangeetha jathimullai

Hi Prakash,

I will give you 5/5 for even attempting a song like this without a carnatic background. I have listened to the original long back, dont really remember how SPB has sung this. You have done a pretty decent job. If you want some feedback that u can work on, here they are

1) Some improvement on Tamil pronunciation! the mispronunciation was in quite a few places, so am not able to list

2) in the beginning alaap, you have to sing right from the throat ( innum azhuthama), the notes were right, but i guess u were a lil concious

3) in the ending swaram part again, ur notes were right, but sounded a lil tired.can you record it in parts? then all this can be solved!

But really really cool job!

Prakash,

I am a Marathi person…So Not sure about the language of the song…So for Pronounciation…I am not authorized…

About the Notes, I think many places to improved…You voice sounded little thin to me….thought in the Middle part of the scale…You can put some weight in you voice while hitting notes…It would make listenerd believe that u wanted to do that… :D

Notes were out of scale at many places…where you sing fast lines mainly…

I can Evaluate better if I know the language I guess… :D

Nice try and as Nithya said…this is real difficult song… :D

Prakash,

AS Shashank pointed, notes were off in some places more bcos of the tiredness than due to your ignorance. If you listen to it now, you can find them yourself. The best way to master such songs is to master it in parts. Try to practice and upload just the alaap without the backtrack. You can use a tanpura or a Sruthi box. It easier to give feedbakcs that way and for yourself too, you will perceptably notice improvements.

Prakash,

Even though there were some off notes in the aalapanai, the energy looked solid and I really appreciate your courage in selecting and rendering this song.