United We Stand

nice stuff george ! just a quick question..did u do harmonies a full octave higher ? did u try maybe with a fourth or fifth note…as usual great stuff…my only concern here with this song is the lyrics somehow demand it to be a little more powerful but its just way too melodic..u know what i mean ? i am not suggesting it be heavy metal really but cud use a little more power…ne ways great stuff..i ll rate it 5/5 on bro !

George…

Very nice job.. Liked it very much. As you must have anticipated, I have not heard the original,but I thought your singing was very good.

Congrats…George

N V K

@Sudeip: Thanks for the feedback man. I know exactly what you mean by the lyrics requiring a heavier voice. What I tried to do is sing one layer of the harmony much higher hoping to convey the urgency and the pain in the message. I dont know if it worked completely.

@NVK: Thanks as always for your feedback NVK . Glad you liked the song. This is Sunny’s project. More of a theme for Muziboo. You should contribute too. You can find more information on the “United we Stand” group.

Hey nice george. I like the way u changed the presence of song. Few places the harmonies are wrong with the progression. And yeah sudeip is right about the voice. The harmonies Specially on the MINOR note change (last word of some lines) is wrong, if u listen to it carefully. i like few places the changes u made in the song valuation(timing). I really like this version, and will be thankful if u can do few corrections. In terms of singing, if u can improve the Verse\stanza 4 lines specially when its a little low in terms of pitch…

For everyones knowledge, this project i have to finish very soon, and i am working on it. The only problem is i have been too busy these days and so cldnt concentrate too mushc. But very soon u will see the final version of it. Still if anyone wants to give any kinds of inputs further in the song, please feel free to do it!!
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Sunny – Lets make come music!!!

If anybody want to listen to the original one…here it is : United We Stand

George, This was great Singing…definitely better singing than Sunny :D…I think he agrees with me too…Only difference here is SUNNY knew the melody better and it was reflected in his attempt…in this case I appreciate your thinking of doing harmonies 1 octave up…but I think I was being force to focus more on your singing/voice than on the SONG …Idea is to emphasize more on the message in the song…Do you get me ?

Definately he has sung better than me. I clearly mentioned that i did a very ruf sinle take…Thanks for reminding everyone Shashank…lol… But the harmonies, are not correct as i stated earlier.

Sunny – Lets make some music!!!

Hey George, that’s a nice job! But somehow your seconds part at “please stop this” and “united we stand” sounds odd to me. Perhaps to reduce the volume a lil bit? Not sure though. Also I felt “Vande Mataram” was going off-pitch at many places. Other than, good one.

Thanks everyone for your precious feedback. I have tried to incorporate all the changes everyone requested and sent an updated track to Sunny :-)