Uyire (my own composition)

I don’t understand the language, but here is what I think bout the song..

* I’m not impressed with the arrangement
* Notes need to be tighter while singing.. Singing could have been better.. Quite a few flat notes and hesitation is sensed while singing
* The bass was off tempo after the beat break
* At 3:20 mins in the song, it was a total mess with the synth
* After a while it started getting monotonous
* Bad mixing

Here is what you could do:
* Choose the instruments you want to include, based on the feel of the song
* May be you could add a pad (I see that when you stop singing, the instruments other than the beats, just stop!)
* Work on setting the levels for different instruments
* Add some reverb to the vocals
* You have a good voice, but you need to improvise.. There is a lot of scope for improvement

All in all, the composition sounds good.. After some refining, this should sound better.. All the best.. Cheers.. \m/




DJ
“Its all bout music and it always will be!”

Sounds like a noob messing on FL or alikes. But, anyways, the journey somewhere begins.. so best of luck.

~ Ronak R. / RokZRooM

Music – My Beloved Obsession!

I too felt this is not clear to me….when it composition…it hs to emboss on mind….which it could not do…

if u wud have upload this without any music also…it would have strike my mind more….notes really need to be crystal clear when it is a composition…