Underlying Unhappiness

Liked it man…Really Rocking Track…

Is it cover ? Compositions ? Sorry I am not good with Rock… :D

this is really good stuff…......u should try some better recording

Hey.. Nice track.. Record this in a studio..

I have some suggestions and I want you to imagine as I tell you..

Try giving a longer pause as soon as the vocals end.. Just two hits with the drum stick and then come back into the song with a slide (upwards) on the guitar (Both Bass and rhythm).. Also do try to choose a patch which has a little more shrill sound for the rhythm guitar.. I would imagine a complete mute after the last two rounds of rhythm that you have played and then the lead begins..

Talking about progression (As you mentioned you guys are into it), another suggestion would be towards the beginning, when the vocalist speaks (I would suggest him to whisper), why don’t you cut off the rhythm and just have a clean plucking by the other guitarist?? Then when the vocalist starts with “Its like a war..” start the rhythm guitar..

What I missed is the lead and the intro of the song.. Its a good composition mate.. Trust me.. I’ve been into progressive music and my intution tells me that this will make it big!! Tell me what you think about what I said once you try it.. Cheers.. \m/

DJ